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[yachiru]

new year’s resolutions for women

don’t wear heels-makeup
should be subdued-no
red lips or bright eyes

mourn

don’t get assaulted-don’t
get murdered or broken-vow
to be more like those dolls behind glass
no dust-no sweat
sit patiently-wait
for someone to come get you

pray

no-don’t pray
call it meditation-remuneration
on spikes or animals or
geopolitical fusion
whatever that is

cry weep wail

bake-or cook
wear aprons with enormous
breasts

lose

make friends with treadmills-forget
about sweat-we
are not concerned anymore

drink until worlds make sense

Comments

[static_abyss]

This was excellent in execution. Your structure and the rhythm of your poem work really well together. It was very impactful and a delight to read.